(gap: 1s) Once, in the gentle twilight of Ashfield Estate, where the air was always tinged with the scent of coal smoke and the laughter of children, there lived a boy named Peter. The rows of neat, if weary, terraced houses stood shoulder to shoulder, and mothers in sensible coats exchanged news by the wire fence as the day drew to a close.
(short pause) On this particular Sunday, Peter was granted a rare treat: permission to attend his friend Susan’s birthday party, even though it meant returning after his usual hour. His parents, ever firm but just, agreed, for Susan’s father was a doctor—a man of great respect in the neighbourhood. Peter promised, hand on heart, to behave as a proper young gentleman should.
(pause) The party was a merry affair. The parlour was filled with the sweet aroma of jelly and sponge cake, and the wireless played cheerful tunes. The children played games and laughed, feeling quite grown-up indeed. But as the evening wore on, Dr. Evans was called away on urgent business, his black bag swinging as he hurried out. Suddenly, the house seemed much larger, and the rules of grown-ups faded into the shadows.
(short pause) Temptation, as it so often does, crept in quietly. The children eyed the drinks cabinet, its glass doors smudged by curious fingers. With nervous giggles, they poured the tiniest drop of whisky into a teacup—just enough to cover the bottom. The taste was sharp and smoky, making Peter’s eyes water, but he laughed along, feeling both daring and guilty.
(pause) When the party ended, Peter slipped home through the cool night air, cheeks flushed with excitement and a secret. He tiptoed up the narrow stairs, careful not to wake his mother, and nestled beneath his patchwork blanket. The house was quiet, save for the distant hum of a passing scooter and the steady tick of the clock in the hallway.
(pause) But peace was not to last. Twenty minutes later, the shrill ring of the telephone pierced the silence. In Peter’s home, a late-night call was as rare as snow in July. He heard his mother’s brisk footsteps on the linoleum and her low, serious voice as she spoke to someone on the other end. Peter’s heart thudded with dread.
(short pause) Dr. Evans had returned, noticed the whisky bottle was not as full as before, and questioned Susan. She confessed, and Peter’s name was mentioned. Dr. Evans telephoned Peter’s mother, who wasted no time.
(pause) The door to Peter’s room swung open, and there stood his mother, her face grave and determined. She switched on the light, and the room was suddenly bright and unkind. “Peter,” she said, “have you been drinking?” Peter’s voice trembled as he admitted to a taste—just a taste—but even that was too much.
(pause) Without another word, his mother took him gently but firmly by the arm and led him down the hallway to her bedroom. The air was thick with the scent of lavender and old wood. On the dresser sat the large wooden hairbrush, its handle smooth from years of use. Peter’s knees felt weak, and his heart pounded like a drum.
(short pause) “Please, Mother, I promise never to do it again,” Peter pleaded, his voice small and earnest. But his mother’s eyes were steady, her lips pressed in a thin line. She sat at her dressing table, the mirror reflecting both their anxious faces, and drew Peter gently but firmly across her lap. The cool brush tapped against his bare skin, sending a shiver up his spine.
(pause) The first smack landed with a sharp, echoing crack. The sound filled the room, mingling with Peter’s startled gasp. The sting was fierce and immediate, a hot bloom of pain that made his eyes water. He had forgotten how much the brush could hurt—how it seemed to burn right through to his bones.
(pause) Peter’s legs kicked, and his hand flew back to shield his bottom, but his mother caught his wrist and held it gently but firmly at the small of his back. “Now, let us begin again,” she said, her voice calm but resolute. The brush rose and fell, each smack landing with a crisp, rhythmic sound—six in a row on the same spot, then moving to another. The pain grew with each stroke, until Peter’s resolve crumbled and tears streamed down his cheeks.
(pause) The room was filled with the sounds of Peter’s sobbing—the sharp slap of the brush, his mother’s steady breathing, and the quiet sniffles of his siblings, who had gathered in the doorway, wide-eyed and silent. Peter felt a wave of shame, knowing they were watching, but the pain was too much to care.
(pause) At last, his mother set the brush aside and helped Peter to his feet. He clutched his stinging backside, hopping from foot to foot, trying to rub away the fire. His mother’s face softened, and she knelt to look him in the eye. “Peter, you must always be honest, and you must never let temptation lead you astray,” she said gently. “We love you, but rules are there for a reason.”
(pause) Peter nodded, sniffling, the lesson burning as much in his heart as it did on his bottom. The house slowly settled back into silence, the only sound his quiet sobs and the steady tick of the clock. He knew he would never forget that night—the taste of forbidden whisky, the sting of the hairbrush, and the warmth of his mother’s arms as she hugged him close, reminding him that even the hardest lessons are given with love.
(long pause) And so, dear readers, remember: honesty is always best, and temptation, though it may seem sweet, often leads to sorrow. A loving parent’s correction, though it may sting, is given to help us grow into good and upright people.







